The assignment rubric/description is attatched in the files below. This is a pap

The assignment rubric/description is attatched in the files below. This is a paper I have already written , but want to be revised. Here is some of the feedback left by my professor, and what should be the main priority in rewritting this paper.  
demonstrates understanding of rhetorical analysis concepts and effectively examines the Taco Bell campaign
needs a one sentence analytical thesis that addresses all of the elements you will include
avoid repetition, instead of saying “the company more popular than before” twice, vary your language 
use transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader through your analysis 
revisit your thesis statement in the conclusion and summarize the main points of your analysis.