PLEASE INCORPORATE THE FEEDBACK THAT WAS GIVEN:
These are some comments to impro

PLEASE INCORPORATE THE FEEDBACK THAT WAS GIVEN:
These are some comments to improve the draft report
Abstract: The summary of the background and methods are well captured. You should also include a summary of key findings and recommendations.
Introduction: A few repetitive words were noticed. Use Grammarly to pick those up in the future. In this section, you should also introduce your specific objectives.
Literature review: Did I miss this section???
Methods: This is well written. However, why did you title it “Research Process”? Be aware that the research process starts when you conceptualize your research, which includes your methodology. Also, there is a difference between the sample size and the study population. Your study population is the students, and your sample size is the number of students you expected to survey.
Results: It is unethical to include the names of students in your results. You should have de-identified them or given them ID/codes. Also, copying and pasting graphics from your survey form with the question is not good practice. You should identify more innovative ways to use them. Read published articles to see more examples.
Analysis of results/discussion: This section is well written. However, you should also include a statement of limitation.
Conclusion: You should suggest actionable steps to ensure students have enough sleep and suggest that further research be conducted to find ways for students to obtain enough sleep.