Please add more contents to my paper and revise the paper to construct the final

Please add more contents to my paper and revise the paper to construct the final

Please add more contents to my paper and revise the paper to construct the final version.
Right now my paper is a draft. You need to add more materials into the paper and revise it and make it into a final version. 
I will attch the requirement, instruction and teacher’s feedback at my draft. Please continue working on my draft