I need help
by editing my paper
I need
support to improve my writing style, and

I need help
by editing my paper
I need
support to improve my writing style, and to strengthen my arguments, and ensure
the structure of my paper to be adheres to master-level standards. I would
appreciate if you could extend my literature by adding relevant and up-to-date
research.
I  attach my work I have done so far. 
Thanks for your support