I have a draft of this part of my dissertation, and specific comments from my di

I have a draft of this part of my dissertation, and specific comments from my dissertation chair for improvements. I have attached two files, the document (word format) that can be edited, and a pdf of the feedback that needs to be incorporated. 
I was not 100% sure how to order this, so I did editing, but am happy to make adjustments to the order to include the additional writing that will need to be done.