It’s a paper about Asian-American identity studies and post-modernism. I need so

It’s a paper about Asian-American identity studies and post-modernism. I need someone who understands those topics. I wrote a 3-page first draft (document titled “Essay first draft)” for the essay. It needs to be extended to at least 8 pages (so at least 5 more pages of writing). My tutor has given me feedback which I have included in the document, edit it based on those suggestions. I have attached all the needed sources.
Beef (2023) is a TV series directed by Lee Sung Jin for Netflix. I need someone who has watched the series. Please mention if you have watched it or not.  Someone who has watched “Chan Is Missing” (1982) is a plus. Thank you. 
Peter Feng’s article (“Being Chinese American, Becoming Asian American”)  is central to the argument as I am arguing the same thing for Beef as Peter is arguing for Chan Is Missing. 
As mentioned in the feedback from my tutor, be specific when stating arguments and supporting points, don’t just use generic words and not explain the specificity.