Attached blelow is the instructions(blank copy)  and the other one is a copy I W

Attached blelow is the instructions(blank copy)  and the other one is a copy I Wrote the teacher marked me a critique on it so if you can redo it for me based on theis critique he gave me:
“For Challenge 4.3, you haven’t adequately explained the self-selection strategy. Inaddition, you haven’t provided good examples of the strategy and you need to provide amore detailed description of the strategy being implemented via the “value array” beingoffered and the individual differences per choice (e.g., content, prices) within the “valuearray.”
If you want to change up everyhting I wrote or choose diffrent companys/industries totally ok i just want to fix everything.