The person who wrote my paper before did not follow the instructions i provided.

The person who wrote my paper before did not follow the instructions i provided.

The person who wrote my paper before did not follow the instructions i provided. The following feedback was provided by my professor: I kept waiting for you to explain the Theory!  Where are: Suitable Targets, Motivated Offenders and Lack of Capable Guardians?  These are the central tenets of the Theory and it is not in your paper (or explained).  The Bullet Point format for sections only eats up page space and does not add to the paper.  In fact this meant that the paper was not at least five pages long!  In your Works Cited there is the “Oxford Research Encyclopedia of Criminology and Criminal Justice,” surprising since the Research Paper Guidelines specifically prohibits the use of ANY encyclopedia.  This source was also cited several times.
The guidelines for the paper and the research paper itself have been uploaded.